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First Chapter first page: [link]
Second chapter first Page: [link]
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Fifth Chapter first page: [link]
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Ok, this requires a bit of an explanation.
First I have to say I had forgotten this subplot completely: probably I have written this around 3 AM and such... :giggle: But yes, when I was writing I thought "Uhm, Lily was given to the chantry when she was little, and children of circle mages are given to the chantry as well... what if..." and then builded a mini subplot about it: "What if Lily was the daughter of two mages which successfully hid her powers (what better place for an apostate to hide in a tower full of mages?) and wanting freedom seduced an apprentice who could successfully destroy his philactery and be a good partener and teacher for her very-likely-mages children? What if Jowan was not the only one who hid something in their relationship? And what would happen if said mage is brought to Aeonar? :plotting:
I had many doubts about this (and :iconemedeme: knows about them as I shared my thoughts with her this afternoon =P) because I didn't want to turn Lily too much OOC, but then I thought... "to be IC/OOC you have to BE a character, not a secondary 30-seconds background actor who incidentally is a temporary companion in one of the origins..." :giggle:). And HEY, she was already a rogue with a warrior spec, can't I give her also the third class? =P

On a lighter note, as Dina returned from her vacation when she reviewed my pages this happened:

DINA (reading page 16): i mean, I understand everything but trying to roast you ex to a cinder isn't a great idea.. I mean, with all those clothes on, the meat get's spoilt
ABA: He survives in fact :D
DINA: Damn! And there she was, impatient to have ex cutlets watching a football game with a beer and a belching unlimited policy... And for breakfast, rival ribs that eaten cold give you more satisfaction...

[TIMELAPSE]

DINA (reviewing page 18): The Cullen fry-up seems nice... Ms Lily should open a pub...

Yes she should... :giggle:

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This is a fan comic based on the Bioware's videogame "Dragon Age: Origins" and expansions.
All characters and characters design except those not fitting the game belongs to Bioware, Ewan is designed on a customizable Player Character so he doesn't belong to anyone but as concept to me, the story is mine so it's not official, no copyright infringement is intended so don't bother me about it.
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Maker's breath, what a bitch! Argh! Lily! The plot twist is having me squirming in my chair. GAH.