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NEW EDITION WITH MODIFIED DIALOGUES REFLECTING DA2-FITTING PLOT AND BACKGROUND CHANGES

This is the First Chapter of the Fan Comic "In Peace Vigilance", collected in a singe Flash SWF file for reading. You can download it here [link] in PDF format for your personal pleasure.

The PDF is print quality (300 dpi resolution CYMK color) and it's around 83 MB. Paper format is standard ISO 216 B5 (176 250 mm = 6.93x9.84 inches).
Redistribution and selling is not permitted. :iconmamahawkeplz:
I choose to uploaded on an external servewr as I don't want to clutter DaviantArt with large, large files. :roll:

Although this comic does not contain strictly mature content, this comic is meant to be read only by adults (or at least by people that have played the game according to their age) due to the themes that can be found in it (as violence, gore, homosexuality, sexual innuendos and partial nudity).

Enjoy :)

This comic may contain spoilers if you didn't play all the Game, Expansions and DLCs and the first two acts of Dragon Age II.

Second Chapter: [link]
Third Chapter: [link]
Fourth Chapter: [link]

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This is a fan comic based on the Bioware's videogame "Dragon Age: Origins" and expansions.
All characters and characters design except those not fitting the game belongs to Bioware, Ewan Amell, Eloise Surana and Cora Cousland are designed on customizable Player Character generated through the game editor, so they doesn't belong to anyone but as concept to the author. The story is a "fan fiction" so it's not part of any official lore. No copyright infringement is intended and no money transaction are made for this comic, so don't bother me about it.

Dragon Age: Origins, Dragon Age: Awakening & Dragon Age II BioWare 2009 - 2011
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Luray Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey! Great job, Fran! Finally I'm reading it, because I was procastinating it like a boss XD, since... I don't know... The DA2 it wasnt' released yet XD.

I really liked the colors and the ---- you used, so right.

Only one thing... I read this pdf and... the page 10 is the same of page 9 XD. It's the same panels, but chaging the dialogues, so it was so confusing at the first, like: Why Anders is sayong he's the commander...?

Just saying in casu you can fix it. I read the "real" page now on your gallery, but in the pdf are wrong XD (in the pdf are pages 11-12).

Now I'm trying to download the second, but, meh, SLOW INTERNET, Y U?
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Luray Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooops, I left this sentence empty XD:
"I really liked the colors and the ---- you used, so right."
I was searching the word in English while I continued writing the comment and I forget to added it later XD. It was "planes", fuck, what I was thinking??? I'm asleep XD.
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Abadir Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
o rly? FFUUU... :noes:
I didn't noticed before... this means I have it wrong also in the flash and in the italian version... :|
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Luray Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In the version I downloaded, yes XD. But I think is better downloading yourself and check it, just in case.
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Abadir Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
the flash has the same problem and they all are originated byt the same file, so it's definetly like it... :iconcriesplz:
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Luray Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh... *pat pat*

Sorry? What can I say? XD
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Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Finally I get to see it...sweet its like a comic book.
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Abadir Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
But without commercials XD
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Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
YAY!!!
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Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Um your thing can't play for me.
I'm sad now.
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Abadir Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Have you tried updating flash player and reload?
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Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
What?
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DemeterAnna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student Writer
I just re-read the chapter (that PDF is really nice thing, saves me from opening a hell-load of new sites) and it might be just my goofy mood, but in that first page (that walking one) Ewan looks so badass. :iconbananplz:
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Abadir Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
Funny, I think this is the worse drawn chapter and that page is the worse drawn page of the chapter so far... ^^;
Anyway that's why I did this PDF edition... :D
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DemeterAnna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student Writer
I don't really care for the quality of it (and you really don't want to know what epithets would I use to describe it and I can be quite creative), as long as I like the story. And I like it. Very much. But I like the image it gives me. Come on! A lone hero on the sunset backbround! Who wouldn't dig that? xD :3
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Abadir Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
You can hear the harmonica playing, right? :D
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DemeterAnna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student Writer
No wait. That's better version [link] C:
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Abadir Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
:XD:
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DemeterAnna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student Writer
[link]
That's better. C:
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Galagraphia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for making pdf! I've finally read the 1st chapter and I like it a lot. And wow, you draw FAST! How can you draw so fast? I'm so damn envious! :la:
Also you have a curious view at Cullen. I could never get mad!Cullen ending, and I had 3 different mage ladies. Interesting. :)
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Abadir Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
As I worked on the script making storylines by chapter, I thought that make a PDF was the best way to enjoy the comic. I'm glad you like it. :)
About my speed, I got somehow inspired and I took advantage of a time I didn't have much work to do. Then, you can see my style is quite linear and essential, I don't like make much useless details that just drive you crazy and doesn't add much to the story or the image itself (that's the architect me talking, I guess :roll:). This and having optimized my coloring tecnique to be as fast as possible (it takes me 10 to 15 minutes to color a page while I spent about two hors to make the lineart...).
Abpout the crazy epilogue, you don't get it if you give indipendence to the Circle, nor if you run into one of the countless bugs of the epilogue (unfixed by patch or caused by mods). I'll fo further into my "curious view" of cullen in the coming pages ;)
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Galagraphia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wait, I thought Ewan gave more freedom to the Circle, why Cullen is crazy then? Bugs? :D
Anyway, I'm curious to see what will happen with him next. I hope you won't be mean to poor fellow, he's not bad, he just needs help and to stay away from lyrium for some time.
(Actually I think lyrium is not necessary for templars, I think Chantry uses it to make them slaves of a sort)
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Abadir Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
Ewan DID gave the circle indpendence (it's said more than once), and I didn't actually got the crazy epilogue with him, but I thought that if with the circle still under templars charge killed a bunch of apprentices and fled, I don't see whym with the same conditions, he shouldn't have TRIED to do something like that.
This, and I needed him out of the tower... :D
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SoniaCarreras Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Great! As soon as I come back to my computer I'm downloading it :). Though if you upload a bigger resolution one I'd be quite grateful too...
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Abadir Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010
Problem is I don't know Indesign settings very well... I skip from a 9.5 MB file to a 181 one, and this is quite annoying... As soon I figure out how to make a decent export (with a decent reolution/filesize ratio) it will be uploaded ASAP, don't worry ;)
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